SCENE ONE: LAKES.
Charlie: (questioning) "Hello?"
*There is no answer so she continues to run. She sees a freaky scary character go behind a tree but she carries on running*
SCENE TWO: ARRIVING HOME
*Charlie walks through the front door*
Charlie: (Shouts) "Mum Dad, I'm home." *walks into the kitchen to find her mum and dad*
Sue: "Oh hi hun how was your run?"
Charlie: "It was....strange."
Andrew: "Were there many people about? see the usuals?"
Charlie: "No thats why it was so weird, normally there are a few people about, people walking the dogs or out with the kids but it was just me today"
Andrew: "well you can hardly blame them, after all it is November. People dont like to go out in the cold"
Charlie: "yeah but this time was different Dad. Something just doesnt feel right."
Sue: "hunny I think you are just being paranoid. So what people decided not to go out today, no big deal"
Charlie: "..............But i did see someone. Or at least I think i did."
Sue: "what do you mean?"
Charlie: "well I was running and something just didnt feel right. I could hear noises and then I saw someone go behind a tree. One minuet they were there the next they had gone"
Andrew: (quickly) "What did they look like?!"
Charlie: "I dont really know. I didnt see much"
*panicked/ suspicious silence*
Sue: (optimistically) "I'm sure it was nothing"
SCENE THREE: STRANGE EVENTS
*Everything is normal for a bit but weather changes as Charlie is watching tv in her room when there is a power cut, scary noise/ loud bang*
Charlie: (shouts) "Dad whats happened to the power?"
*gets up to investigate/ go down stairs*
*Lights come back on*
Charlie: "Okaaayy maybe the power is fine"
*tree branch hits the window*
Charlie: "Jeez what is going on with the weather today?"
*goes to the window and can see a figure in the background*
Charlie: (gasps) (shouts) "Dad!"
*Runs out of the room to find the rest of the family downstairs"
SCENE FOUR:
Andrew: "What is it? Whats Wrong?"
Charlie: (panicked) "The guy from the lake. He's out side"
Andrew: "What does he look like?"
Charlie: ".....he.." *Ryan interrupts"
Ryan: "Has a Red Mask, Looks kind of like a devil. He never does anything, just watches and waits"
Charlie: "How did you know that?"
*More noises*
Ryan: "I've seen him before. He watches us"
Andrew: (extremely agitated and panicking) "WHY DIDNT YOU TELL US?!?" *Turns to look out of the window*
*figure more predominantly seen*
Andrew: (fear) "He's here"
*Light out for a second and the figure has gone*
Sue: (confused) "Andy there is nobody there"
*Andrew goes to the window but person has gone*.
*Hear a smash sound*
*Goes silent, can hear footsteps*
Ryan: "whats that noise?"
Charlie: "He's here"
*the sounds stop they think they are safe*
Sue: (unconvinced) "Dont be daft there is nobody here"
*Lights start to flicker, they look back at the window thinking the man is there again*
*The door handle starts to open, door opens against the wall lights go out for last time*
Charlie: (scream)
Good detail in your script. Remember not to try and include too much action in your 2 minutes! Also, try comparing your script to other thriller openings - do they have much dialogue at the start?
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